Made available in DSpace on 2014-06-11T19:30:28Z (GMT). No. of bitstreams: 0 Previous issue date: 2011-02-14Bitstream added on 2014-06-13T20:00:41Z : No. of bitstreams: 1 pontes_mar_dr_sjrp_parcial.pdf: 116637 bytes, checksum: 50ebe4a8bc3666d744bb508700bb5561 (MD5) Bitstreams deleted on 2015-08-07T12:19:54Z: pontes_mar_dr_sjrp_parcial.pdf,. Added 1 bitstream(s) on 2015-08-07T12:20:57Z : No. of bitstreams: 1 000641237.pdf: 22753973 bytes, checksum: dd09d424fdde610dace1a426fca8667b (MD5) / Com base na perspectiva da intertextualidade estrita (KOCH, 2009), este trabalho investiga a produção de texto com reescrita orientada pelo professor em contexto universitário, com o objetivo de descrever os processos por meio dos quais o escrevente gerencia a entrada do texto alheio no seu próprio texto, tanto na produção da primeira versão do texto, quanto na reescrita dele. As instruções iniciais e intervenções feitas pelo professor com o intuito de auxiliar o escrevente na tarefa de escritura e reescritura são levadas em consideração na análise, no sentido de verificar o papel desempenhado por elas durante o processo de escrita/reescrita. As justificativas dessa proposta residem, de um lado, no enfoque teórico fundamentado na intertextualidade estrita, já que estudos realizados no Brasil sobre reescrita voltam-se mais para a prática pedagógica de reescritura; e, de outro lado, no recorte do contexto universitário para a investigação, pois pesquisas sobre reescrita têm priorizado os ensinos Fundamental e Médio, sendo menos frequentes os trabalhos com alunos universitários. O corpus é formado por 21 conjuntos de texto, que incluem: proposta de produção; primeira versão do aluno; comentários do professor; versão reescrita. Os resultados apontam para uma preferência por formas de intertextualidade implícita na retomada de textos da proposta e pela utilização da paráfrase como processo de reformulação do texto, indicando uma tendência à diluição do texto alheio como modo de absorção pelo texto, com uso restrito de formas que explicitam a fonte das informações retomadas / Based on the strict perspective of intertextuality (KOCH, 2009), this study investigates the production of text rewritten guided by the teacher in the university context, in order to describe the processes by which the clerk manages the input of others in your text itself, both in producing the first draft, and in rewriting it. The initial instruction and interventions made by the teacher in order to assist the clerk in the task of writing and rewriting are taken into account in the analysis, in order to verify the role played by them during the process of writing / rewriting. The justification of this proposal lie on one side, the theoretical approach based on strict intertextuality, since studies performed in Brazil on rewriting is turning more to teaching the practice of rewriting, and on the other hand, the clipping of the university context to investigation, because studies have focused on rewriting the elementary and high schools, and less frequently works with college students. The corpus consists of 21 sets of text, comprising: a production proposal, the first version of the student, teacher comments, rewritten version. The results indicate a preference for forms of intertextuality implicit in the resumption of the draft text and the use of paraphrase as a process of redrafting the text, indicating a tendency to dilute the other's text so as to absorb the text, in limited ways that explain the source of the information included

Orientador: Clélia Cândida Abreu Spinardi Jubran / Banca: José Gaston Hilgert / Banca: Edson Carlos Romualdo / Banca: Lourenço Chacon Jurado Filho / Banca: Fabiana Cristina Komesu / Resumo: Com base na perspectiva da intertextualidade estrita (KOCH, 2009), este trabalho investiga a produção de texto com reescrita orientada pelo professor em contexto universitário, com o objetivo de descrever os processos por meio dos quais o escrevente gerencia a entrada do texto alheio no seu próprio texto, tanto na produção da primeira versão do texto, quanto na reescrita dele. As instruções iniciais e intervenções feitas pelo professor com o intuito de auxiliar o escrevente na tarefa de escritura e reescritura são levadas em consideração na análise, no sentido de verificar o papel desempenhado por elas durante o processo de escrita/reescrita. As justificativas dessa proposta residem, de um lado, no enfoque teórico fundamentado na intertextualidade estrita, já que estudos realizados no Brasil sobre reescrita voltam-se mais para a prática pedagógica de reescritura; e, de outro lado, no recorte do contexto universitário para a investigação, pois pesquisas sobre reescrita têm priorizado os ensinos Fundamental e Médio, sendo menos frequentes os trabalhos com alunos universitários. O corpus é formado por 21 conjuntos de texto, que incluem: proposta de produção; primeira versão do aluno; comentários do professor; versão reescrita. Os resultados apontam para uma preferência por formas de intertextualidade implícita na retomada de textos da proposta e pela utilização da paráfrase como processo de reformulação do texto, indicando uma tendência à diluição do texto alheio como modo de absorção pelo texto, com uso restrito de formas que explicitam a fonte das informações retomadas / Abstract: Based on the strict perspective of intertextuality (KOCH, 2009), this study investigates the production of text rewritten guided by the teacher in the university context, in order to describe the processes by which the clerk manages the input of others in your text itself, both in producing the first draft, and in rewriting it. The initial instruction and interventions made by the teacher in order to assist the clerk in the task of writing and rewriting are taken into account in the analysis, in order to verify the role played by them during the process of writing / rewriting. The justification of this proposal lie on one side, the theoretical approach based on strict intertextuality, since studies performed in Brazil on rewriting is turning more to teaching the practice of rewriting, and on the other hand, the clipping of the university context to investigation, because studies have focused on rewriting the elementary and high schools, and less frequently works with college students. The corpus consists of 21 sets of text, comprising: a production proposal, the first version of the student, teacher comments, rewritten version. The results indicate a preference for forms of intertextuality implicit in the resumption of the draft text and the use of paraphrase as a process of redrafting the text, indicating a tendency to dilute the other's text so as to absorb the text, in limited ways that explain the source of the information included / Doutor

Afin de porter un regard différent sur les pratiques d’écriture des élèves au moment de la transition entre l’écoleprimaire (CM2) et le collège (6e), cette thèse éprouve l’hypothèse suivante : les conceptions et les opinions que lesenseignants révèlent dans leurs énoncés constitue le cadre conceptuel des décisions qu’ils prennent pour élaborerdes situations d’enseignement et d’apprentissage, quel que soit le niveau où ils enseignent.La thèse s’appuie sur l’analyse du rapport à l’écriture de dix-neuf enseignants. Cette notion, empruntée à différentesapproches présentées dans ce mémoire, est opératoire pour montrer que ce rapport à l’écriture des enseignants faitpartie intégrante des conditions de maitrise de la production d’écrits à l’école : il est en effet déterminant pour queles élèves apprennent à écrire et à entrer dans une littératie étendue.En interrogeant l’hétérogénéité discursive, cette thèse décèle dans le discours des enseignants des éléments quirésultent d’une appropriation-reformulation des prescriptions officielles. Le point de vue institutionnel est ainsiintégré à leur propre dire dans une relation d’accord et de consonance qui fait peu de place au discours proprementdidactique.Au résultat, dans les pratiques déclarées, le processus d’écriture-réécriture et les fonctions de l’écriture semblentoccultées par une préoccupation majeure centrée sur la correction de la langue. Ces éléments conduisent à denouveaux questionnements en termes de didactique et de formation. / In order to bring a different look on the writing practices at the transition from primary (CM2) to secondary school(6e), this thesis tests the hypothesis that what is said by teachers constitutes the conceptual framework of theirdecisions in elaborating teaching and learning situations.This thesis is based on the analysis of 19 teachers’ relationship with writing, an operational notion borrowed fromdifferent approaches presented here. This work shows that the teachers’ conceptions and opinions are an integralpart of the conditions of a good command of writing at school. Indeed, this is determinant for students to learnhow to write and reach an extended literacy.By questioning the discursive heterogeneity, this thesis reveals elements in the teachers’ discourse that are theresults of an appropriation-reformulation of the official prescriptions. Therefore, the institutional point of view isintegrated in their own statements within an agreement and consonance relationship that leaves little room for atruly didactic discourse.Finally, the process of writing-rewriting in the declared practices as well as the functions of writing, seem hiddenby a major concern focused on the language accuracy. Those elements lead to questions in terms of didactics andtraining.